[KI-LC] Comment to the Bridging IMS and Internet Identity Whitepaper

[Dervla O'Reilly]

This message is to inform the LC & TIWG that staff has received the  
following comment to the Bridging IMS and Internet Identity Whitepaper.

Comments:
The paper is a hard read if you are not deep into Telco.  This can be  
assisted by [1] adding an acronym section up front [2]rewriting the  
Abstract and Introduction to be much briefer and clearer on the  
purpose (which appears to be 'reconciling and interopoerating the  
protocols telcos traditionally use for authentication, with the  
established privacy aware protocols from the Identity Management  
community'.

Start each section on a new page to make readinge easier.


I expect TIWG leadership to review and discuss these comments at their  
next meeting (F2F tomorrow-July 1 in Berlin).  The review period will  
end July 1, if further comments arrive I will forward to LC and TIWG.

Cheers,
Dervla

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